Chapter Three, Twist Of Fate?

Milla and George have become really good friends! It's only been 2 months since they moved, and they are best of friends, maybe more.
"Milla Salle, will you be my girlfriend?" George asked with a twinkle in his eyes, although his heart was beating out of his chest with adrenaline.
"Ohmygoodness! Yes! Yes! Yes a thousand times yes!" Milla beamed with joy.
They sealed the deal with a long kiss and had dinner at a restaurant. 
"I love you, George."
"I love you too, Milla, 'til the end of time."
Milla blushed a little bit, and lent into him and hugged him tight.

School was a drag for George and James, George just wanted to get out and see Milla, who had recently moved schools because of her parents (they had recently become very famous, and thought of it necessary to send her to a private school.) and James just wanted to go home and practice the drums.
Marie was away from 06:00am to 10:00pm for filming her new movie, Commitment Issues, the Movie, where she plays the oblivious Cassandra Goth, and Delvin Ashton plays the heartbreaker known as Don Lothario. They have been friends since school, 25 years ago.
Louis was also away on business, his company is opening a new mega-store in China, and he needed to be there to make sure everything ran smoothly. He left early in the morning.

***MICHELLE'S POINT OF VIEW ***
He was SO perfect! His blond hair, his mocha eyes were a deeper brown than the coffee they sell at the cafe!
I searched his eyes to try and find and imperfection, but there wasn't! He was simply perfect, a little too perfect?

***Normal POV***
George wondered why Milla was looking at him strangely.
"Milla? You okay?"
"Hmm? Yeah, sorry!"
"What's up with you lately? You seem distant."
"No, just thinking."
"About what?"
"Well, I can't remember anything before my 4th birthday..."
"Yeah, nobody can silly!"
"No, I mean, You can remember bits right? Well, I can't. Mine are like paintings in puddles and the colors have ran."
"Weird."
"Hey! Don't call me weird!" Milla seemed just a little bit ticked off...
"Woah, I'm sorry! I didn't think you would mind..."
Milla stormed off like a bratty child.

Else where in the neighbourhood...
"Jay, I still don't get it! I mean, Michelle was playing in the sand pit outside in the morning, then came in and I washed her in the tub, then gave her something to eat, put her to bed, and then she was gone? Nobody came into the house so where could she have gone?"
"I know, I didn't let her out, she was fast asleep."
Francesca let out a snarl everytime a child was mentioned.
"I can't believe you're STILL looking for the brat!" She said in a cold, heartless tone.
Jay stood up and flexed his knuckles, Jesse held him back.
"Out. Get out of my house, Francesca!" Jesse fired at her.
"Fine, keep the kid, I HATE children."
She walked out of the house without saying bye to Pete.
She opened the garage door, and drove off to one of the local bars.

"Aunt Jesse?" Pete asked his aunt whilst trying to hold back the tears.
"Yes Pete?"
"Where's my Mum going?"
"Out."
"M'kay... And can you help me look like... a man?"
"I'd ask uncle Jay."
Pete asked his uncle, and Jay turned him into quite the charmer ;)

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